tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16128162.post1284178524198446582..comments2009-04-07T01:18:51.272-07:00Rodrigohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07524224640628135457rodrigoneely@gmail.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16128162.post-2546489312815434392009-04-07T01:18:00.000-07:002009-04-07T01:18:00.000-07:00Thank you Red, I think I will take your advice.Rodrigohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07524224640628135457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16128162.post-67290523275756352742009-04-06T15:30:00.000-07:002009-04-06T15:30:00.000-07:00Agreed, this was very beautiful. Although for some reason I was picturing you in a self-imposed exile on Mars. You were channeling Doctor Manhattan!<BR/><BR/>It's said that very few people can write good stream of consciousness pieces. Every time I try and go back and change things, defeating the purpose. Nice job.<BR/><BR/>-BarryZarathustrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03563976199382374255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16128162.post-78065378222539992222009-04-06T10:08:00.000-07:002009-04-06T10:08:00.000-07:00That was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read by you, and in general. You could easily turn this into a spoken word... while reading it I pictured you up on stage doing so to a subtle beat. -RedRed Foxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09048584062074016562noreply@blogger.com